Posts from September 2009.

Pathways: Final Thoughts

Well, that’s it for my long story. There are some successes and some failures with it. First off, some stats. It’s 73 typed pages at 31000 words. A full bore novella, really. I’m not sure how many total posts I made for it or how long it took. Except to say it took probably about twice the time I expected it to.

And that, really, is what the major failure was. Around the middle of the story, I got bored with it. I think that can be seen fairly readily by anyone who has read the entire thing. The middle parts of the story became shorter, as I wrote maybe only 4-5 typed pages per week, and the story moved much slower than I had originally planned. When I first started, I was excited about it and near the end, I got excited again (especially after the spaceport exploded).

I hadn’t anticipated that happening, since I’ve written novel-length prose before. But as I worked, I realized that with the novels, if I didn’t really feel up to working on it for a month, I was under no personal pressure to do so. So I was able to leave it, go write some other stuff, then come back when I felt I could pour the proper amount of creative juices into it. In this story, I did not, and really it wasn’t until I wrote some other, non-EVE related stuff that I began to get back into the flow of things here. But I think I ended it nicely. I think the last four or five parts really were among the best I’ve written.

I may come back and write some more about these characters (at least the ones who survived) some other time. But for now, I think they’ve had enough excitement in their lives. Next week will not see a new story, but the week after that I will be returning for more one-off stories. Around the middle of November, I’ll have hit the year mark and finished up my personal project of a “story a week (though there were two or three weeks I missed)”.

Thanks for reading!

Pathways: A Forlorn Destination

Here’s the end. Final thoughts after the actual story.
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Pathways: The End of the Road

This is what you could call the climax. The events have come to an end here, though the individual stories have not been completed. There are still some loose ends to tie up next week. With that, I’ll give my thoughts on the entire crazy ride. But for now, enjoy (or despise) the true conclusion.
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Cacame’s Quest

Here’s some more Cacame fiction! This was originally written and published on the Dwarf Fortress forums in 3 parts, but I’ve decided to post it all together here. It comes from a suggestion someone made on the thread about Cacame and his eventual revenge against the person who killed his wife. I also spun a demon named Egngun into the tale. Egngun is from someone else’s game and was a demon who had somewhere in the neighborhood of 2000 elf kills once they finished world generation. It inspired fan art of he and Cacame battling. The Dwarf Fortress community is awesome.


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Pathways: Final Steps

After this, two more.
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Pathways: The Sick Fall

Three more parts to go after this!
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